What’s missing from my work?

NOTE #125. Youโ€™re not missing a photograph. Youโ€™re missing a direction. Strong images alone do not make a project. What turns a portfolio into a story is position, trajectory, and the courage to exclude.

A mother in a red sari and her child press against a rain-streaked car window, the girl's hand on the glass, in a color photograph by Steve McCurry.

ยฉ Steve McCurry

What’s missing from my work?

It’s the question I get most often. It comes after months of work, sometimes years. The person asking usually has the photographs already. They have the technical quality, the visual consistency, sometimes even a solid body of images. And yet something doesn’t hold.

The answer they don’t want to hear is this: you’re not missing a photograph. You’re missing a direction.

A portfolio with 30 strong photographs can still fail as a project. It happens more often than you’d think. The images are good one by one, they hold the gaze, but placed together they go nowhere. There’s no trajectory. No point from which everything departs and no point toward which everything converges. Scrolling through the work, you feel like you’re going in circles.

The difference between a set of good photographs and a project is one thing, a position. A project knows where it’s looking from. It doesn’t have to declare it, no manifesto is needed. You can tell from the first image, from the sequence, from what was left out. A set of good photographs, on the other hand, shows everything the photographer can do. It’s a rรฉsumรฉ, not a story. And nobody flips through a rรฉsumรฉ twice.

As an editor I see it immediately. When a body of work has a position, the photographs talk to each other. When it doesn’t, every image competes with the one next to it for attention. None opens, none closes, none serves as a pivot. It’s a wall. I’ve seen portfolios of ten images with more direction than portfolios of a hundred. The number is irrelevant. What matters is knowing where you’re going.

Quality is not the problem. Quality today is a starting point, not a destination. The problem is knowing what you’re trying to say and having the courage to remove everything that doesn’t say it. Including the photographs you love the most.

Before sending a portfolio, ask yourself: where am I looking from? If the answer isn’t clear to you, it won’t be clear to anyone.

Marco Savarese
Editor-in-Chief

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Marco Savarese

Marco Savarese is Editor-in-Chief at Eyeshot, the independent publisher he founded in Italy in 2018. He spends most of his year reading portfolios, judging the Open Call, and editing the magazine catalogue. The reading desk is open, and he takes one-to-one Professional Reviews from photographers working seriously on long-term projects.

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