Where a Project Dies

NOTE #139. When you close your next project, ask yourself which image you want the reader to carry away. Not the strongest. The one that says what you were really doing. If you do not have it, the project is not finished. It has only reached the bottom.

An abstract close-up of curled, torn material forming a spiral around a flower-like shape, in a black-and-white photograph by Walker Evans.

ยฉ Walker Evans

Where a Project Dies

A project doesn’t die where you think it dies. It doesn’t die in the opening images, which almost always hold, those are the ones you picked to get your foot in the door. It dies three quarters of the way through, when the reader has stopped seducing himself with the promise of the opening and starts asking what you are still saying. If the book gives way at that point, whatever comes after will be read through that collapse.

As an editor I see it often. Drafts arrive with the first twenty images strong, a hurried ending, and in between the emptiness where the project gave up. The ending decides what will stay in memory.

Walker Evans’s American Photographs is the book that taught American photography to think of a book as one whole work. Published by MoMA in 1938, eighty-seven images in two sections, fifty and thirty-seven, with Lincoln Kirstein’s essay at the back. Evans opens with the faces of sharecroppers, miners, veterans, and the places where those bodies exist: barbershops, houses, painted signs. Then he lets the people go. The second part becomes an inventory of architecture, factory towns, country churches, facades. And it closes with Tin Relic.

A piece of stamped tin, a fragment of early twentieth-century architectural ornament, photographed as a still life. No one inside. No street. A residue. The book had already shown one. The second part had opened with Stamped Tin Relic, 1929. Evans bookends the section with an ornament torn from a wall. After eighty-six images of bodies and facades, the last is an abandoned thing.

That is not a decorative ending. It is a judgement. It tells the reader: everything you have seen will leave this behind, an ornamental trace torn from its building. Evans does not explain it. He puts it at the bottom, and the bottom speaks.

When you close your next project, ask yourself which image you want the reader to carry away when they are done looking. Not the strongest. The one that says what you were really doing. If you do not have it, the project is not finished. It has only reached the bottom.

Marco Savarese
Editor-in-Chief

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Marco Savarese

Marco Savarese is Editor-in-Chief at Eyeshot, the independent publisher he founded in Italy in 2018. He spends most of his year reading portfolios, judging the Open Call, and editing the magazine catalogue. The reading desk is open, and he takes one-to-one Professional Reviews from photographers working seriously on long-term projects.

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